Monday, December 14, 2009

Im coming home from the war with a gash in my neck

Wow,that was rough,I had never done anything harder in my life here's my injuries: Gash in my neck,crick in my neck,bullet in my thigh.....and that's all my injuries.Anyway, I wonder how America will turn out? I think that I know what to do: share money with our friends(including the one that is in a cot for 50 days)and relatives,get enough money to buy a farm for our friends and family and us,fund the cities so that they can rebuild them,also I don't know what will happen with the land from the land won in the french and Indian war,and if all this works we will have a 4Th of July like no other WE WILL.....i don't know

2 comments:

  1. What you have done is simply ensured that you mentioned the questions posed in the assignment to pacify my directions in attempt to just get finished. The problem is, your entry has no depth or vivid elaboration that will allow the reader to visualize anything about your post-war experiences. I have told you an ample amount of times that you need to improve the quality of your blogs instead of focusing on just satisfying the status quo. 50%

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